Love is more than Paradise . .
Years ago i thought love is a paradise very far away,
Or its something that would never come my way..
I flew through the clouds and stopped at a place
Wher an angel approach me and said this way..
"I will offer you paradise but its only a glance
If u like it then you should keep it in your heart..
For ever and ever..ther's no turning back after you see the place..
I took a risk to follow his way and ended up in paradise
He told me he would take..
I was instantly lost in the beauty of this place,
The paradise i always thought that is so far away..
I hav lived in the paradise for enough time to understand its way,
Such a reviewing experience so far i have gained..
All my blues and troubles passed away..
From the moment i stepped into this place..
7 Comments:
Love is more then paradise...umm i doubt..
well one of yr most wonderfull post :) keep writing dear.
Kshitij
and so married the angel and didnt even cared to call ur frens from hell...:(
any ways, nice one...is it ur own? coz if that is u got to go pro.
@ crazzy...
love is so... u wudnt understand ;)... or rathr, u dnt wanna understand???
@ kshitij,
will keep writing ....
@ vinal,
hhee... will marry and angel ;) and frnds are alwaz welcome, dnt need to invite them :)
@ mitu,
glad u liked it :)
Love is lovely, for those who have the eyes to see it. For the blind[metaphorically], it's just a paradise-lost. For those who wake up late, a chance of a paradise-regained. For those foolish like me, it's paradise-never-found!
good poem :)
@ phoenix,
well said.... btw y do u call urself foolish?? and as it is, if u dnt find love it isnt foolish... possibility u jst missed seeing it correctly...
:)
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